📌 The Overwhelming Baseline Essay
Every year, our school wanted all students to complete a baseline essay writing assessment. I remember sitting there, grading 120 essays, determined to create a table marking every single writing skill gap at once.
As you can imagine, I was quickly overwhelmed. After an hour, I’d only graded and recorded gaps for seven students. There was no way I could finish this task without losing my sanity. So, I stopped.
📌 Teaching to the Middle Wasn’t Working
But giving up had consequences. I felt like I was just teaching to the middle, and that didn’t fix anything.
Some students were writing fragments and run-ons galore. Others could craft sentences but lacked any paragraph structure. And my advanced students? They were bored.
Something had to change.
📌 Why Rubrics and Conferences Fell Short
I started analyzing what I already had:
✅ Rubrics were too broad—they didn’t pinpoint which sentence, paragraph, or essay skills were missing.
✅ Writing conferences took forever, pulling me away from teaching.
✅ I needed something simple, thorough, and data-driven—without feeling like I was teaching blindfolded.
That’s when I realized what I needed was a diagnostic writing assessment.
📌 Creating My Own Writing Diagnostic
Since I couldn’t find what I wanted, I decided to build it myself.
I broke it into three levels to target the specific skills students truly needed:
1️⃣ Sentence Writing Assessment
2️⃣ Paragraph Writing Assessment
3️⃣ Essay Writing Assessment
Here’s how it worked:
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Students started with the sentence assessment. If they scored 80% or better, they moved on to the paragraph assessment.
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If they scored under 80%, they stopped there. Why test skills they weren’t ready for yet?
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Those who passed the paragraph level advanced to the essay assessment.
📌 Instant Feedback with Google Forms
We did the diagnostic on paper first. Then students entered their answers into self-checking Google Forms.
✅ Instant feedback for them (and less grading for me!)
✅ Automatic spreadsheet data I could filter and analyze
It was such a breakthrough. For the first time, I truly knew who needed what.
📌 Why This Matters for Middle School and Homeschool Writing
Why is this so important?
Because students who can’t write clear sentences will struggle with paragraphs—and essays will feel impossible. That’s often why kids shut down during writing tasks.
We can’t ask them to leap before they’re ready.
By using a diagnostic writing assessment, I could finally differentiate effectively:
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Sentence-level practice for those who needed it
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Paragraph work for those ready for structure
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Essay writing for the ones who could handle the challenge
My goal? Bring every student up to grade level writing by the end of the year.
📌 Ready to Try This in Your Classroom or Homeschool?
If you’ve ever felt like you’re guessing at your students’ writing needs, this diagnostic might help you the way it helped me.
It’s simple, thorough, and built to help both middle school teachers and homeschool parents meet every learner where they are.
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